In background and family "ruled with person" makes no sense to me. If you can could you please explain?
It was meant to be "ruled with a new person"
I like how you added her traits and appearance.
I like how you put in that she "killed" her brothers.
The thing that makes your website more informational and interesting was talking about what her kids did later in life and what they grew up to be
I liked how you told her story
My name is CaLee VanVoorhis and I'm 12 years old. I have twin brothers named James and Joseph, my parents names are JoDee and Paul, and I have a dog named Stella.